Rewrite Done

April 4, 2008

Well, I’ve gotten through most of the editorial rewrite of Wolfbreed #1 (Yeah, I know, but I just e-mailed Anne a bunch of title ideas) and I’m going to go over copy-editing type stuff this weekend and hopefully send out the final draft to her and Eleanor by Monday. Most all the changes were due to genre considerations. I was fortunately expecting this, as I didn’t really know what genre I was writing until I finished the book. It was a horror/fantasy/historical/romance mashup, and the final rewrite was toning down a little (ok a lot) of the horror, and ramping up the romance. 90% of this was all a matter of tone and emphasis, the only events in the novel that changed were the ending and some additional scenes of backstory. Most of what I did was crank the viscera meter down from 11. (Actual critique quote from draft 1.5: “You have quite a dismemberment theme going here.”)


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  1. [...] scenes I’ve yet written.  In anything.  (And remember Geoff Landis commented on my “dismemberment theme” in Lilly’s Song.)  And, what made it so brutal wasn’t the viscera so much as [...]

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